Hello Brendan,
Interesting to say the least, and I like experimentation as it leads to increased knowledge. So I applaud your effort.
Your next step would be to learn more about the technology and science that you are dealing with. Two very good reference books for 802.11 and Radio Frequency are the following links.
https://www.cwnp.com/store/products/CWNASG.html
http://www.arrl.org/catalog/?categor...26+Propagation
You have basically constructed an omni-directional antenna. Some of the problems I see with it are:
1. The small size of the coaxial cable exiting from the actual antenna.
2. That same coaxial cable is of different lengths.
3. The active element inside the can appears to be quite long in the one image, is that the correct length as that is very important?
The first consideration is that you are dealing with microwave frequencies and that forces one to abide by a different set of rules than let us say your normal FM radio frequencies. There are many principals that become important. This link is a good start for the science of microwave propagation and it is done by a fellow amateur radio operator, which makes it more interesting as we like to experiment.
http://www.tapr.org/ve3jf.dcc97.html
I might suggest looking at this antenna design, it is also an omni-directional antenna but it will provide more gain than the setup you have made. Not from the actual antenna aspect, but from the having to connect all four together and that is where a great deal of RF energy will be lost.
http://wireless.gumph.org/articles/homemadeomni.html
One last small sermon. As I mentioned I appreciate experimentation and research as I am one of those types. But, I found it slightly disconcerting when you said you were going to do “fun things with people’s wifi connections”. It is the goal of this forum to help people with wireless needs and interests. I would ask that you please refrain from doing anything to anyone else’s equipment/network. It is not showing the proper respect that we all deserve. Setup your own lab or better yet share the research with a friend who has the same interest.